Bài Mẫu Writing Task 2 chủ đề Giáo dục trẻ em

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Bài mẫu luyện thi IELTS Writing  Online tại nhà Task 2 chủ đề Giáo dục trẻ em

Recently, education has become an increasingly popular topic. While it is argued that children should start going to school as soon as possible, there are some people who strongly advocate that at least 7 years old is the suitable age for them to attend formal education. In my opinion, I agree with the latter point of view. Discussed below are several reasons supporting my perspectives.

Going to school at a very early age brings children as well as their parents a great number of people. Firstly, children have a golden chance to approach general knowledge earlier than those who start later. It means that they have more time to practice and motivate their memory power. Secondly, by doing this, children have experiences in interacting with different people such as teachers and friends. It leads to that their soft skills are eventually enhanced.

However, there are some people supporting the idea that they should go to school at the age of at least 7 years old. In fact, they have this opinion because the harmony among family members will be tightened because they have longer time of staying at home under the support of their relatives. Another point I would like to make is that this age is seemed to be suitable when children have particular level of confidence to have social relationships. During this period, children are let to do things alone and interact with others friendly.

In conclusion, the mentioned facts above have created a dilemma when people discuss the impacts of the issue. From my point of view, I put more emphasis on the idea that children should go to school at the age of 7. People should have further consideration of the issue.

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