Giải đề thi IELTS Writing ngày 16/01/2020

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Task 1: The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they give birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

The bar chart depicts some striking information about the rate of females in a country called Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 3 different years: 1966, 1986 and 2006.

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Overall, the rate of women falling into 25-30 age group decreased while the opposite was true for those of the remaining cases.

Staring at the highest point with more than 60% in 1986, the percentage of 20-24 year old females saw a plunge to almost 40% in the next two decades and stood at roughly 35% in the year 2006. Similarly, the proportion of people belonging to 19 and under 19 age group which started at the lower point with 37% in 1986, witnessed a gradual decline to approximately 15% in the next 40 years. Turning to women aged 25-30, the ratio accounted for nearly two fifths at the beginning of the period before peaking at a half in 1986 but then decreased steadily to 40% in 2006.

Meanwhile, the rate of women aged 30-34 and 34-39 experienced rockets from 15% and 9% to 48% and 30% over the time period, respectively. Turning to the last category, the rate of 40+ women stayed relatively stable at under 5% during the given time.

Task 2: Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Giải đề thi IELTS Wwiting ngày 16/01/2020

Over the past few years, technology has become a broad issue to the general public. There are many people who strongly advocate that films, which are normally made by big firms, can be produced by everyone thanks to the development of technology. In my opinion, its cons never overshadow its pros. Discussed below are several advantages as well as disadvantages of the issue.

First and foremost, people should recognize that there are a number of benefits of the issue. A very important point to consider is that the support of digital technology helps amateur filmmakers save a great deal of time. It is because of the fact that published phones have recently been accompanied with film making applications which can merge videos as well as insert lively effects in a short time. Another point I would like to make is that most cutting-edge electronic devices are installed with modern camera and inserted with huge capacity solid disk. It means that the quality of the videos created by handheld devices in comparison with professional ones is relatively the same.

On the other hand, in addition to the advantages, this issue also has some drawbacks. In fact, people have this opinion because many movies with low-quality content which are made in a fast way are uploaded day by day on the internet. It leads to that making a film, which is generally considered an art-oriented work, is undervalued at present owing to the bombardment of videos like this. Moreover, it decreased the creativity of the people who produce films by using electronic devices. It can be illustrated by the example that by applying available apps in the phones, many movies have the same sound and visual effects.

In conclusion, the mentioned facts above have outlined some positive and negative aspects of the issue. Although the world has been witnessing a significant development of digital technology in film making, I personally believe that it has both advantages and disadvantages. People should have further consideration of the issue.

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